DA ASSIGNMENT 2

DA Assignment 2

Writing Summary by Fitri Nurwiyanti

1.      Sentence 1

An article in Campus magazine entitled “Publics Participation For Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the first school Taman Siswa built by Ki Hajar Dewantara.

In the first sentence “an article” replace of “Publics Participation For Education” it is called substitution of noun. In first sentence before “present” it should be “that” to emphasize of who is the present of the first school Taman Siswa it is called ellipsis. In sentence 1 “taman siswa” refers to Ki Hajar Dewantara called synonymy. Repetition of “by” (first sentence). “First” is called temporal conjunction to show the events in the text (first sentence).

2.      Sentence 2

 Education paradigm is growing in Indonesia to fulfill the spirit of education these days.

In second sentence “education paradigm” replace “Indonesia” called substitution of noun. In second sentence “these” as replacement of the day where education paradigm is growing called comparative reference.

3.      Sentence 3

Citizens should get competent education.

In sentence 3 “component education” as clausal ellipsis that presents the component education what.

4.      Sentence 4

Education is responsibility by government and the side of private sector individual and group.

Here “and” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 4).

5.      Sentence 5

Because of limited cost, the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better than government schools.

In this type “because of” of conjunction, the relationship is one of cause and consequence and it can be called hypotactic conjunction (sentence 5). Repetition of “education”, “open”, “school”, “government” (sentence 5).  Here “and” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 5). These collocations are “school”, “course”, “education” (sentence 5).

6.      Sentence 6

 Supported by complete and good facilities make this school rather expensive because it also promises the good management on its education.

“supported (0)” is meant to what the supported is pointed (sentence 6). The pointed of business education, it is called demonstrative reverence (sentence 6). “This” changes of the business education in sentence 5 which complete and good facilities (sentence 6). “it” replace by “complete and good facilities” called substitution of noun (sentence 6). In sentence 6 “its” changes of develop business education in sentence 5 called substitution of verb. Repetition of “good” (sixth sentence). In this type “because” of conjunction, the relationship is one of cause and consequence and it can be called hypotactic conjunction (sixth sentence).

7.      Sentence7 

  Indonesia has pesantren as education system (Islamic boarding house models).

The synonymy “pesantren” to “education system” (sentence 7)

8.        Sentence 8

It is classified into two models: First Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students and students can stay and study freely.

“It” replace by “education system” in sentence 7 called anaphoric references which pesantren (sentence 8). “First” is called temporal conjunction to show the events in the text (sentence 8). “it” replace by “ traditional pesantren” called anaphoric reference which pesantren (sentence 8). Here “and” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 8). Repetition of “student” (sentence 8). “can stay (0)” is meant to whom that stay, it can be meant stay of the traditional method (sentence 8).

9.      Sentence 9

They study about Islamic science for the sake of individual and public.

 Here “and” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 9). “They” refers to “pesantren”, it is anaphoric reference which emphasize to the backward (sentence 9).

10.  Sentence 10

The traditional pesantren still be one choice by our society under class social.

“One choice” replace by “the traditional pesantren” in sentence 7 called substitution of noun (sentence 10).

11.   Sentence 11

Second, Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students.

“Second” is called temporal conjunction to show the events in the text (sentence 11). In this type “because” of conjunction, the relationship is one of cause and consequence and it can be called hypotactic conjunction (sentence 11). It” replace by “modern pesantren” called anaphoric reference which pesantren (sentence 11). Here “and” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 11).

12.   Sentence 12

They do not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art.

“Not only but also” is called subordinate conjunction (sentence 12). “Science” consisting of Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art, is called general word reiteration. Here “and” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 12). “They” refers to “pesantren”, it is anaphoric reference which emphasize to the backward (sentence 12).

13.   Sentence 13

They are prepared to face the era that always changes.

“That” explain the meant before is the purpose of preparing, it can called be hypotactic conjunction (sentence 13). “They” refers to “biology, mathematics, physics etc”, it is anaphoric reference which emphasize to the backward (sentence 13).

14.   Sentence 14

Without being realized, the friction could happen from motivation of organizer and management of existing education.

“That” explain the meant before is the purpose of preparing, it can called be hypotactic conjunction (sentence 14). “Without (0)” emphasize to the change of the era, it is called ellipsis (sentence 14). Here “and” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 12). Friction (0) of the free of traditional pesantren, it is ellipsis.

15.   Sentence 15

To get the good education with their equipment of facility they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children.

Here “and” “also” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 15).  Repetition of “get” (sentence 15). “that” explain the meant before is the purpose of preparing, it can called be hypotactic conjunction (sentence 15). 

16.   Sentence 16

Poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education.

Antonyms of poor people vs. rich man in sentence 16. “They” refers to “poor people to power of bargaining”, it is anaphoric reference which emphasize to the backward (sentence 16).

17.    Sentence 17

Government and private sector individually and group have big homework to repair their education inspect that aims on making organization of education.

Here “and” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 17).  “that” explain the meant before is the purpose of preparing, it can called be hypotactic conjunction (sentence 17).  “their” the poor people, it is both of anaphoric and cataphoric reference, poor and rich man.

18.  Sentence 18

 I agree with the writer who says that about publics participation for education is important.

“That” explain the meant before is the purpose of preparing, it can called be hypotactic conjunction (sentence 18). “That (0)” it meant of the writer in the zero ellipsis (sentence 18).   I as anaphoric reference especially fitri. The writer as miftakhul as anaphoric reference.

19.   Sentence 19

He says that the education not only managed by government, but also the society who has contribution to build education together, about how they create good education, both the facilities, system and soon.

“Not only but also” is called subordinate conjunction (sentence 19). “He” is points to before pronoun of the writer, it can be called anaphoric reference (sentence 19).  Synonymy of build and created (sentence 19). Repetition of education (sentence 19) to stress its importance. “That” explain the meant before is the purpose of preparing, it can called be hypotactic conjunction (sentence 19). He as anaphoric reference as miftakhul.

20.   Sentence 20

 The government should think that all the society level can enjoy education reasonably.

“That” explain the meant before is the purpose of preparing, it can called introductory clause (sentence 20).

21.    Sentence 21

Moreover, to get good education with equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man’s children.

“Moreover” is called temporal conjunction to show the events in the text are related in terms of the timing of their occurrence (sentence 21). “they” refers to “government and private sector” it is anaphoric reference (sentence 21). Repetition of “get” (sentence 21). Here “and” “also” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 21). 

22.   Sentence 22

      I think that the middle society should optimalize brilliant brain to be able to compete with others.

23.   Sentence 23

      The writer says that the poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education.

 “That” explain the meant before is the purpose of preparing, it can called be hypotactic conjunction (sentence 23). “They” refer to “the poor people” it is anaphoric reference which emphasize to a previously mentioned entity (sentence 23).

24.  Sentence 24

            I think that this statement is true.

“That” explain the meant before is the purpose of preparing, it can called be hypotactic conjunction (sentence 22). “true (0)” it points to true statement, so it is ellipsis (sentence 24).

25.  Sentence 25

      The government and the private school should really provide scholarship for the students who have competence to enjoy education.

Here “and” signals the presentation of additional information called additive conjunction (sentence 21).